tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post2840138940744948738..comments2023-05-29T17:46:16.544+05:30Comments on Abin's literary world: Monsoon MusicUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-35371569916231344812012-07-27T17:33:15.655+05:302012-07-27T17:33:15.655+05:30I sense the relief that rain brings after heat...I sense the relief that rain brings after heat...Cadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16184350413033668517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-22973205332775549702012-07-25T13:55:10.545+05:302012-07-25T13:55:10.545+05:30"In these our days full of dimples on earth. ..."In these our days full of dimples on earth. That bubble with hymnals from choirs of toads"<br /><br />You captured it very well. The croaking of toads especially after a monsoon downpour. It's certainly is musical. Great write, Abin!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-76444752979094801452012-07-25T06:03:14.990+05:302012-07-25T06:03:14.990+05:30There's a great deal of beauty in this, Abin, ...There's a great deal of beauty in this, Abin, and I love the ending.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-59884706836971425212012-07-24T10:59:29.196+05:302012-07-24T10:59:29.196+05:30Loved the opening set the toneLoved the opening set the toneAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17957913294364310380noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-82472261653188770612012-07-24T09:22:35.251+05:302012-07-24T09:22:35.251+05:30I love this: "swell to the call of coal-colou...I love this: "swell to the call of coal-coloured clouds"<br /><br />Your closing makes me think that the whole world is singing for you because you're in love. Either you had a really great first date, or you've set a wedding date. Or maybe today is the wedding.flipside recordshttp://flipsiderecords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-77553001881322791742012-07-23T19:33:32.361+05:302012-07-23T19:33:32.361+05:30Drizzle of the monsoon on drought-ridden skin
Wash...Drizzle of the monsoon on drought-ridden skin<br />Washes down brown barren leaves from my lips..<br /><br />I especially love the sound qualities of your opening lines in this poem: the way the d's and b's work together with the double consonants and vowels. This is a wonderful technicality of your work, which I appreciate over and above your descriptions.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-35841772752546704372012-07-23T16:34:23.764+05:302012-07-23T16:34:23.764+05:30The rhythms communicate the feelings well. Love th...The rhythms communicate the feelings well. Love the ending. The poem brought an emotional response from me.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-70724764721037410062012-07-23T03:53:22.472+05:302012-07-23T03:53:22.472+05:30"To strum through my days, new sonatas on flu..."To strum through my days, new sonatas on flute<br />That swell to the call of coal-coloured clouds<br />In raptures of notes unexplored."<br />!!!!!!!!!<br />"Even as ducks and geese paddle forth<br />On ponds that are drummed with harmony of hearts<br />In these our days full of dimples on earth<br />That bubble with hymnals from choirs of toads."<br />!!!!!!!!!!!<br />You see, it is the whole poem, that date with the monsoon that brings beauty and not pain, that I love. The narrator may be the person who receives the gift or the god who creates it and now revels in the joy of what it has become?Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-43199521065419711752012-07-23T00:57:56.965+05:302012-07-23T00:57:56.965+05:30I like the rapture of notes unexplored and the joy...I like the rapture of notes unexplored and the joy of music, even from nature ~<br /><br />Happy Sunday to you ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-74729823310953262702012-07-23T00:20:36.388+05:302012-07-23T00:20:36.388+05:30I love "that bubble with hymnals from choirs ...I love "that bubble with hymnals from choirs of toads." Beautiful writing, Abin.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-47780133938552648922012-07-22T22:55:30.396+05:302012-07-22T22:55:30.396+05:30My favorite line ... On ponds that are drummed wit...My favorite line ... On ponds that are drummed with harmony of hearts. What a beautiful image.Serenahttp://www.serenahelriot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-56973682155101860802012-07-22T22:54:33.155+05:302012-07-22T22:54:33.155+05:30Lovely imagery. I especially like : "full of ...Lovely imagery. I especially like : "full of dimples on earth / That bubble with hymnals from choirs of toads"<br /><br />Thanks for a pleasant read today :)PhotoDictionhttp://photodiction.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-4283261175038510022012-07-22T22:26:44.381+05:302012-07-22T22:26:44.381+05:30I like the image of grass sprouting through the gr...I like the image of grass sprouting through the gravel.Oak Creek Ranchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02875705582058188289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-79672778949329123162012-07-22T20:50:39.848+05:302012-07-22T20:50:39.848+05:30Nice imagery! Love it when nature is painted clear...Nice imagery! Love it when nature is painted clearly through words.Dennis Gohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08843481043615546890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-51404041398546228342012-07-22T20:47:13.118+05:302012-07-22T20:47:13.118+05:30Everything flows together so well - beautifully wr...Everything flows together so well - beautifully written. Thanks for sharing such a marvelous poem.Gordon Ghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07791540354618351095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-52292531363311603112012-07-21T19:19:21.685+05:302012-07-21T19:19:21.685+05:30So beautiful... and I love the ending!So beautiful... and I love the ending!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-48356668099714314242012-07-20T00:19:20.520+05:302012-07-20T00:19:20.520+05:30The music of sound, sight, touch, and cohesion...v...The music of sound, sight, touch, and cohesion...very complete, incredibly thoughtful.<br /><br />Also, it's great to see frequent posting from you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com