tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post3809184109585727791..comments2023-05-29T17:46:16.544+05:30Comments on Abin's literary world: MisfitUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-32720224477859135602013-06-24T22:32:43.442+05:302013-06-24T22:32:43.442+05:30Your last two stanzas are delightful solutions--an...Your last two stanzas are delightful solutions--and throughout the alliteration is stunning.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-76358856184851195792013-06-24T22:15:31.994+05:302013-06-24T22:15:31.994+05:30Doing what we hate to escape into what we love...T...Doing what we hate to escape into what we love...There is hope in our drudgery. :) Great write!Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-22353599575289566192013-06-24T21:38:56.140+05:302013-06-24T21:38:56.140+05:30to paraphrase - poets as ghosts in the machine. Ni...to paraphrase - poets as ghosts in the machine. Nice write. ~ Mgrapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-11560569089624531792013-06-24T19:00:55.736+05:302013-06-24T19:00:55.736+05:30love that last image: phantoms of hopelove that last image: phantoms of hopeBrother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-22873041237089772462013-06-24T18:55:24.310+05:302013-06-24T18:55:24.310+05:30...can't risk spells in the asylum or church........can't risk spells in the asylum or church...<br />I like how you coupled those two together LOLTimoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-91751584487127305972013-06-24T15:52:07.292+05:302013-06-24T15:52:07.292+05:30be it Tom in a bank, or Tom in the warehouse...the...be it Tom in a bank, or Tom in the warehouse...there have been warriors..who have fought and then won...and i am sure you will too...bravo brother...sayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12141178112411062040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-1726550624182888872013-06-24T15:52:05.221+05:302013-06-24T15:52:05.221+05:30be it Tom in a bank, or Tom in the warehouse...the...be it Tom in a bank, or Tom in the warehouse...there have been warriors..who have fought and then won...and i am sure you will too...bravo brother...sayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12141178112411062040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-61008240702231421152013-06-24T11:29:59.990+05:302013-06-24T11:29:59.990+05:30second part of the third verse is very strong.. an...second part of the third verse is very strong.. and also <br />"I dance among circuits and unwanted chips<br />And practice with phantoms of hope."<br />felt very close to me.Natašekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07529563989376279044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-15922917088651225372013-06-24T06:30:54.604+05:302013-06-24T06:30:54.604+05:30Really like the "phantoms of hope" and o...Really like the "phantoms of hope" and only wish I'd found them sooner. They do help get us through the every day drudgery,<br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/06/23/lost/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-9096448454242609802013-06-24T05:11:32.565+05:302013-06-24T05:11:32.565+05:30A very well crafted piece.A very well crafted piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-30026837409609692402013-06-24T01:30:56.874+05:302013-06-24T01:30:56.874+05:30Such a beautifully wrought piece--every time I rea...Such a beautifully wrought piece--every time I read one of your pieces, I am transported--Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-13584899978883197932013-06-23T23:37:56.355+05:302013-06-23T23:37:56.355+05:30I relate to the tedious passage through doing-what...I relate to the tedious passage through doing-what-we-hate, and LOVE the surcease to be found in poetry where we "practice with phantoms of hope". Well said!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-33081678489236441562013-06-23T18:18:58.183+05:302013-06-23T18:18:58.183+05:30This is really a beautifully crafted poem, Abin!This is really a beautifully crafted poem, Abin!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-80880447703349408732013-06-23T17:43:25.329+05:302013-06-23T17:43:25.329+05:30Day to day life entwined in numbers and graphsDay to day life entwined in numbers and graphsVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-65317818454571770192013-06-23T13:58:56.901+05:302013-06-23T13:58:56.901+05:30I love the line below your blog title. It's th...I love the line below your blog title. It's the first thing that drew me in. <br /><br />This poem is so inspiring and bittersweet. I just adore the rhyme and then the free verse style. Wow, why have I never come across this blog before?<br /><br />Greetings<br /><br />The Pensive OneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-41081151748145879152013-06-23T13:11:51.382+05:302013-06-23T13:11:51.382+05:30This is something of a tour de force through scien...This is something of a tour de force through science and maths? Where did you come out?J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.com