tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post5019273868530238042..comments2023-05-29T17:46:16.544+05:30Comments on Abin's literary world: Sleepless in SaltlakeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-79391460004496328582012-10-31T05:23:06.991+05:302012-10-31T05:23:06.991+05:30sleep full of illusion of rest
... actually the w...sleep full of illusion of rest<br /><br />... actually the whole poem is clever!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-70334009715333450432012-10-31T00:30:58.470+05:302012-10-31T00:30:58.470+05:30I'm no stranger to those sleepless nights, eit...I'm no stranger to those sleepless nights, either!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-22047223985603001902012-10-30T23:10:16.892+05:302012-10-30T23:10:16.892+05:30Hank, I am a bit late in commenting for the Pantry...Hank, I am a bit late in commenting for the Pantry this week. Sigh. Whew, this is a strong poem......definitely a 'sleepless night.' Been there!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-52494140433464208092012-10-30T21:01:41.837+05:302012-10-30T21:01:41.837+05:30The feeling of sleeplessness and an unsettled mind...The feeling of sleeplessness and an unsettled mind are all to idenifiable, especially in the wake of last nights full moon. This had that desperate feel that only an overactive mind can give....great internal drama, loved it.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-13168928086036886732012-10-30T18:27:00.460+05:302012-10-30T18:27:00.460+05:30Trapped into unchanging patterns of same...
I'...Trapped into unchanging patterns of same...<br /><br />I'm sure we all know how this feels at times.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-83515249205992658412012-10-30T02:50:14.000+05:302012-10-30T02:50:14.000+05:30oh too many great lines here Abin...well done!oh too many great lines here Abin...well done!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-1519503327807345432012-10-30T02:35:11.608+05:302012-10-30T02:35:11.608+05:30Enjoyed this tour of sleepless anxiety, so well de...Enjoyed this tour of sleepless anxiety, so well described. (I've been there so I know it well) The last line says it allBarbarahttp://barbarathehealthynut.blogspot.com/2012/10/airborne.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-32015078029742944552012-10-30T01:23:58.065+05:302012-10-30T01:23:58.065+05:30Your first stanza just grabbed me--this piece is r...Your first stanza just grabbed me--this piece is really full--lovely, lovely writingAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-84944189824904603832012-10-29T19:47:02.909+05:302012-10-29T19:47:02.909+05:30ugh...I hate sleeplessness...I've had struggle...ugh...I hate sleeplessness...I've had struggles with insomnia so I can so relate. Nicely woven with tech references to describe the experience.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-15076803779705931692012-10-29T14:36:59.427+05:302012-10-29T14:36:59.427+05:30Thanks.Thanks.Matthew John Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09692136501131270216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-77704014596992484652012-10-29T08:57:14.310+05:302012-10-29T08:57:14.310+05:30I writhe among sheets with eyes open shut. And cou...I writhe among sheets with eyes open shut. And count my minutes full of sweat<br /><br />One often gets riled by events. It might take a toll on us. We can overcome eventually all by ourself! Nicely Abin!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-52921208766834864272012-10-29T05:04:20.449+05:302012-10-29T05:04:20.449+05:30i feel the struggle in each linei feel the struggle in each lineWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-13720510936428270012012-10-29T00:51:45.502+05:302012-10-29T00:51:45.502+05:30I especially love "torn between fears of a wi...I especially love "torn between fears of a withered old dawn". Clever equating thoughts to a hard drive and unused files.........Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-85441084427315420172012-10-15T07:54:13.664+05:302012-10-15T07:54:13.664+05:30That last stanza was powerful evocative ~ Enjoyed ...That last stanza was powerful evocative ~ Enjoyed your share Abin ~<br /><br />Have a wonderful week ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-17889754269893319532012-10-12T17:44:58.608+05:302012-10-12T17:44:58.608+05:30This charged ahead with fierce finesse, I love the...This charged ahead with fierce finesse, I love the rhythmic touch. You also remain the best at incorporating technological references.<br /><br />You're capturing stress and hopelessness rather perfectly, too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-67370125761294372772012-10-12T15:53:07.452+05:302012-10-12T15:53:07.452+05:30Wow ... full of feelings !!!Wow ... full of feelings !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.com