tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post6737435271839031228..comments2023-05-29T17:46:16.544+05:30Comments on Abin's literary world: Zone beyond WordsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-66021071372443501362014-10-28T10:06:23.464+05:302014-10-28T10:06:23.464+05:30Your word choice really made this poem. Great job!...Your word choice really made this poem. Great job!Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-85375131009385619722014-10-27T10:30:02.597+05:302014-10-27T10:30:02.597+05:30Visceral and emotive. Poetry somehow lingers on t...Visceral and emotive. Poetry somehow lingers on the edge of that zone, I think. Beautifully woven. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-56524093732083010902014-10-27T04:26:31.189+05:302014-10-27T04:26:31.189+05:30Sweet!
ZQSweet!<br />ZQZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-63738146313529278532014-10-27T02:55:40.546+05:302014-10-27T02:55:40.546+05:30I guess there should be a zone where all things ar...I guess there should be a zone where all things are smooth and forgiven. Lovely poem, I can connect with it.<br /><br /><br />Jamztoma<br />jamztoma.blogspot.comNicholas https://www.blogger.com/profile/05252355730748268069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-59383715873441493032014-10-27T02:35:48.501+05:302014-10-27T02:35:48.501+05:30Lovely: wish, repetition, what to have there and w...Lovely: wish, repetition, what to have there and what to leave out. Perfect!Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-61266970761666022092014-10-26T23:23:21.391+05:302014-10-26T23:23:21.391+05:30I really like this poem. Such a flow and vibrant e...I really like this poem. Such a flow and vibrant ending.Gen Giggles https://www.blogger.com/profile/13744815023509063722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-66235807465149897362014-10-26T22:47:58.332+05:302014-10-26T22:47:58.332+05:30You have used such beautiful language here, which ...You have used such beautiful language here, which transports the reader to the very plane you write about......very lovely, Abin. I especially like the "bruised little selves". Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-40644930959756528672014-10-26T21:26:24.669+05:302014-10-26T21:26:24.669+05:30Yes words can be light as nothing... a single glan...Yes words can be light as nothing... a single glance or a kiss speaks much louder.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-31747335512582847962014-10-26T19:43:25.354+05:302014-10-26T19:43:25.354+05:30Beautiful. Beautiful. Jyotsna Bhatiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12201588215531490861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-36428780001890174242014-10-26T18:23:20.558+05:302014-10-26T18:23:20.558+05:30I like what you did with this concept. Sometimes ...I like what you did with this concept. Sometimes words are secondary to the workings of the heart.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-41494622864214953872014-10-26T17:22:15.693+05:302014-10-26T17:22:15.693+05:30it is there...there is that place where no words a...it is there...there is that place where no words are needed and the love finds its own way to communicate....uaully reserved for a much more mature love...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-82987977422912352892014-10-26T17:22:04.919+05:302014-10-26T17:22:04.919+05:30When speaking through eyes, words aren't neede...When speaking through eyes, words aren't needed.Vandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-9431800427455396562014-10-26T16:01:36.651+05:302014-10-26T16:01:36.651+05:30Exquisite use of language and images up to the kil...Exquisite use of language and images up to the killer last two lines. Kudos!Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15506538737806033824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-10659978025833651842014-10-26T16:00:57.305+05:302014-10-26T16:00:57.305+05:30wonderful expression of words that paint a wonderf...wonderful expression of words that paint a wonderful piece of art without too many brush strokes.<br /><br />lovely write, mi amigo Marcoantonio Arellano (Nene)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10713672589582754484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-27234942498922498582014-10-26T14:18:18.172+05:302014-10-26T14:18:18.172+05:30How can you measure love, when all you need is to ...How can you measure love, when all you need is to be engulfed?Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.com