tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post7666343839195275864..comments2023-05-29T17:46:16.544+05:30Comments on Abin's literary world: UnspokenUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-47527030649288765922013-05-08T22:32:17.024+05:302013-05-08T22:32:17.024+05:30What wonderful words -how I would love to be loved...What wonderful words -how I would love to be loved thus.<br /><br />So sad your words are bound...<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-66733589614882001472013-05-08T16:21:54.256+05:302013-05-08T16:21:54.256+05:30Love the musical feast of love - an adoring love t...Love the musical feast of love - an adoring love that seems spellbound!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-59706787540024976592013-05-07T20:10:15.781+05:302013-05-07T20:10:15.781+05:30The visuals in this one make it shine brilliantly....The visuals in this one make it shine brilliantly. Love on the lamb brings to mind so many different emotions as a man. Acceptance may be the driving force of the universe for males, and until such time we shall meter out our love in half hatched dinner plans and trips to the Hamptons, all the whlie eating our supper alone and dreaming of that warm place. Great writing...made my morning.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-60395260032404069282013-05-07T19:45:04.392+05:302013-05-07T19:45:04.392+05:30A passionate voice Abin, specially the opening ver...A passionate voice Abin, specially the opening verse ~ But I would not be silent though, but speak of such light and storm ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-85830275438753158612013-05-07T17:06:35.325+05:302013-05-07T17:06:35.325+05:30Nice work Abin - you had me from the first line. ...Nice work Abin - you had me from the first line. Your work is so well crafted.Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-16942135161270495482013-05-07T08:51:49.486+05:302013-05-07T08:51:49.486+05:30Abin, my first time here, thanks to Real Toads! T...Abin, my first time here, thanks to Real Toads! This poem has that melancholy of a true lover.<br /><br />The best line, for me, was "Bound by the fishnets of duties and don'ts," playing off "do's" in a creative way.<br /><br />Loved reading this aloud. Thanks for posting at Real Toads! AmyAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-3816256354519811202013-05-07T08:17:05.669+05:302013-05-07T08:17:05.669+05:30A beautiful poem of love lost, full of longing and...A beautiful poem of love lost, full of longing and pain.<br />KKay L. Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09966266404058177742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-30357579509911391422013-05-07T07:16:11.256+05:302013-05-07T07:16:11.256+05:30So would I cling as striplings of light.And flicke...So would I cling as striplings of light.And flicker on her curves with abandon and zeal.With ecstasy of surrealist thrill.<br /><br />The yearnings and moaning of love will be but a temporary irritant. It will eventually right itself with bliss and ecstasy. Nicely Abin!<br /><br />Hank<br />kaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-58572511631568560612013-05-07T03:43:06.481+05:302013-05-07T03:43:06.481+05:30awwww, the silence. sigh.awwww, the silence. sigh.Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04030161532713347225noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-76417689762718737252013-05-07T00:14:32.398+05:302013-05-07T00:14:32.398+05:30Beautiful... I especially like the second stanza.Beautiful... I especially like the second stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-90107233512624115522013-05-06T23:58:12.754+05:302013-05-06T23:58:12.754+05:30Or would I tangle..
Or would i dangle..
I love th...Or would I tangle..<br />Or would i dangle..<br /><br />I love the musicality of your lines, always rich with fine thought and imagery.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-80743793774326346402013-05-06T15:34:41.976+05:302013-05-06T15:34:41.976+05:30I enjoyed the homage to the Metaphysicals, and lov...I enjoyed the homage to the Metaphysicals, and loved the playing with light in imagery of the central stanzas.Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380213493011623153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-83601063987164296392013-05-06T15:15:03.134+05:302013-05-06T15:15:03.134+05:30Bound by the fishnets of duties and don'ts
Ar...Bound by the fishnets of duties and don'ts<br /><br />Aren't we all?! :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-59398813179721056752013-05-06T14:37:29.389+05:302013-05-06T14:37:29.389+05:30Beautiful description of the pain of unrequited lo...Beautiful description of the pain of unrequited love.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01150958320376074115noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-10571569700972984332013-05-06T10:08:02.206+05:302013-05-06T10:08:02.206+05:30I can feel the longing in this. Rich and beautifu...I can feel the longing in this. Rich and beautiful Abin.Jennifer Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04344877737695801883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-58903983631339485942013-05-06T08:28:17.401+05:302013-05-06T08:28:17.401+05:30Gloriously penned, Abin. Your closing lines are br...Gloriously penned, Abin. Your closing lines are breathtaking........I think just showing your love this poem would do the trick! Never keep silent when it comes to love is my motto (sadly I'm too late smart, kiddo!)Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-26608293170770479222013-05-06T05:10:06.438+05:302013-05-06T05:10:06.438+05:30Abin you are such a master at the subtle--just gor...Abin you are such a master at the subtle--just gorgeous!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-19199741479767979122013-05-06T03:15:23.100+05:302013-05-06T03:15:23.100+05:30This poem makes me want to say "Ahhhhhhh.&quo...This poem makes me want to say "Ahhhhhhh." Such beautifully expressed love.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-82606899157912312202013-05-06T01:00:05.832+05:302013-05-06T01:00:05.832+05:30Beautiful!Beautiful!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-50785475757022790332013-05-06T00:39:58.709+05:302013-05-06T00:39:58.709+05:30This is breath-taking you have me at the first lin...This is breath-taking you have me at the first lines. I wish I could write this exquisitely! Consider me impressed!<br /><br />I am<br />http://mindlovemisery.wordpress.com/<br />Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16157593291278155756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-18990713058940211212013-05-02T12:57:49.851+05:302013-05-02T12:57:49.851+05:30A feast.A feast.Matthew John Davieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09692136501131270216noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-7501917105167887942013-05-01T21:31:50.034+05:302013-05-01T21:31:50.034+05:30emotional lines flowing from the heart..GOD<3Uemotional lines flowing from the heart..GOD<3Uadhi dashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15945609464117886294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-84470509795094033962013-05-01T20:44:24.417+05:302013-05-01T20:44:24.417+05:30one of your recent bests..some of the images are w...one of your recent bests..some of the images are wonderful..the poem flows...like the song in her veins...one of those poems which make you come closer to the screen while reading..a brings a smile on one's lips when posting a comment about it with relishsayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12141178112411062040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-1597025662969038012013-05-01T11:43:53.246+05:302013-05-01T11:43:53.246+05:30BEAUTIFUL AND SPEAKS OF TRUE LOVEBEAUTIFUL AND SPEAKS OF TRUE LOVEVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-68869292363739592392013-04-30T23:56:55.200+05:302013-04-30T23:56:55.200+05:30poetic sadness is always beautiful..poetic sadness is always beautiful..asteria's canvasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02408565009305995259noreply@blogger.com