tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post7723732788701170691..comments2023-05-29T17:46:16.544+05:30Comments on Abin's literary world: Excuse for RhymeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-85160325102129145802016-08-20T17:11:17.809+05:302016-08-20T17:11:17.809+05:30good to read ur work after quite some time. good to read ur work after quite some time. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14266407239012532431noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-54439914140390161422016-06-13T23:57:50.346+05:302016-06-13T23:57:50.346+05:30after a long time brother..and the lyricality and ...after a long time brother..and the lyricality and the rhythm makes it worth the wait..vamos..the heart calls for a ghazal...sayanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12141178112411062040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-48004443774122680792016-06-13T21:26:08.922+05:302016-06-13T21:26:08.922+05:30Your poem is so much more than a mere excuse. You...Your poem is so much more than a mere excuse. Your rhyme is lovely. I enjoyed so many lines especially the one about twilighted rays, prayers, the incense of grace. There is sophistication in this - so much more than simple rhyme. I enjoyed this much and don't want a ticket to fly. I'd rather stick around and read.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-69651762244455976442016-06-13T11:44:18.949+05:302016-06-13T11:44:18.949+05:30Seems like any excuse is a good one! (Smile.)Seems like any excuse is a good one! (Smile.)Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-79028860092360551432016-06-13T02:05:41.950+05:302016-06-13T02:05:41.950+05:30Nice poem. I enjoyed the second verse.
Have a ple...Nice poem. I enjoyed the second verse.<br /><br />Have a pleasant Sunday, Abin.Jacqueline Howetthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522485407848765933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-20889782719743586462016-06-13T01:01:56.128+05:302016-06-13T01:01:56.128+05:30Love pondering your verse Abin!
Donna@LivingFro...Love pondering your verse Abin! <br /><br />Donna@LivingFromHappinessDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13420133886162844400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-29031800680819056692016-06-12T22:47:31.772+05:302016-06-12T22:47:31.772+05:30I love "and crowns a new ballad of soft purpl...I love "and crowns a new ballad of soft purple days".Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-72592350068033920282016-06-12T20:53:28.583+05:302016-06-12T20:53:28.583+05:30Funny how you start off with a simple 'just be...Funny how you start off with a simple 'just because' and then along the way it developers rhyme as well as reason<br /><br />This was a lovely write<br /><br />have a beautiful Sunday Abin<br /><br />much love... Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-52970623593650938572016-06-12T20:48:39.680+05:302016-06-12T20:48:39.680+05:30"...twilighted rays that'll lace
my praye..."...twilighted rays that'll lace<br />my prayers with the incense of grace."<br /><br />That is just beautiful! The scent, the colors, the idea it brings to mind. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-7617232122503437902016-06-12T17:13:19.476+05:302016-06-12T17:13:19.476+05:30Hmmm - thinking about this one, Abin! My guess is...Hmmm - thinking about this one, Abin! My guess is that the black and white face is a little dog, as a puppy can often pull "at the heartstrings in unusual ways."Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-77889027874582448542016-06-12T16:16:17.935+05:302016-06-12T16:16:17.935+05:30Oh those little rhymes that bother the muse, but t...Oh those little rhymes that bother the muse, but they are good for making a point.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-48036863868362896252016-06-12T15:57:20.260+05:302016-06-12T15:57:20.260+05:30Poets are in the business of mass production and c...Poets are in the business of mass production and churn out their poems pleasing themselves and sometimes the readers. We are literary industrialists!Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-65853550428448831512016-06-12T15:35:43.138+05:302016-06-12T15:35:43.138+05:30Beautifully written, Abin :)Beautifully written, Abin :)Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-28334504678277258282016-06-12T14:31:42.290+05:302016-06-12T14:31:42.290+05:30I am always happy for the opportunity to read your...I am always happy for the opportunity to read your rhymes. Hope you are keeping well, Abin.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.com