tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post7912411402898314709..comments2023-05-29T17:46:16.544+05:30Comments on Abin's literary world: For UsUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-16342291631952201642013-09-10T22:42:37.532+05:302013-09-10T22:42:37.532+05:30i will not lie, I read it atleast three times to r...i will not lie, I read it atleast three times to read between the lines..but finally got the substance..as always there is always something new and unique to read.asteria's canvasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02408565009305995259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-76460274895881670392013-09-10T16:59:05.468+05:302013-09-10T16:59:05.468+05:30Love this, especially "We mine our depths for...Love this, especially "We mine our depths for ores full of gems" wonderful!Lisa A. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11142569864419738394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-61125953093054274772013-09-10T06:03:42.466+05:302013-09-10T06:03:42.466+05:30So undaunted still amid sparks that'll fly,
We...So undaunted still amid sparks that'll fly,<br />We mine our depths for ores full of gems<br /><br />One tries to get enough info to deal with matters. Sometimes one gets played out just as much. It's true! Nicely Abin!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-29906040005746331582013-09-10T00:10:36.910+05:302013-09-10T00:10:36.910+05:30Fascinatingly cryptic. Fascinatingly cryptic. Timoteohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08351410966396854582noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-27050539067983185562013-09-09T21:19:53.112+05:302013-09-09T21:19:53.112+05:30We mine our depths for ores full of gems
What bet...We mine our depths for ores full of gems<br /><br />What better occupation for a writer? :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-10497626760640474042013-09-09T20:55:27.238+05:302013-09-09T20:55:27.238+05:30The bad and the good of mining--will it support st...The bad and the good of mining--will it support strong and healthy homes for all classes or destroy the very foundation of all things? I would there were a middle ground to experiment before proceeding. In my relationships I have on occasion found the gems.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-20357972827125006192013-09-09T20:51:16.888+05:302013-09-09T20:51:16.888+05:30The opening line is amazing, Abin, and the remaind...The opening line is amazing, Abin, and the remainder of the poem does not disappoint. There is self-knowledge here, and an acceptance of a lifestyle we cannot change or escape.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-8879141406563758292013-09-09T18:44:31.483+05:302013-09-09T18:44:31.483+05:30A good bedrock still isn't strong enough to su...A good bedrock still isn't strong enough to support lies and sugar-syrup blockbuster tales...<br /><br />I think this is a very nice, thought provoking piece.Debi Swimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08255928985823418669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-34073261216739440572013-09-09T13:03:45.891+05:302013-09-09T13:03:45.891+05:30Let this voice spread...a poignant poem!
A man is ...Let this voice spread...a poignant poem!<br />A man is responsible for his ignorance. Very well written! Panchalihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08832164041967778122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-4827947234366377942013-09-09T06:08:52.805+05:302013-09-09T06:08:52.805+05:30I especially like the second stanza - mining our d...I especially like the second stanza - mining our depths!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-18285257028355534762013-09-09T05:02:15.176+05:302013-09-09T05:02:15.176+05:30Abin, I always look forward to what you present us...Abin, I always look forward to what you present us with. I was not disappointed. That last stanza is truly chilling, a comment on the times.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-72287534609480244852013-09-09T02:12:29.261+05:302013-09-09T02:12:29.261+05:30I am thinking of granite & ash as bedrock of r...I am thinking of granite & ash as bedrock of relationships ~ It can only be sustain if both mines the depths for gems, not lies ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-58417426930852852752013-09-09T00:36:01.721+05:302013-09-09T00:36:01.721+05:30I agree with Brian--we all pay the cost--and make ...I agree with Brian--we all pay the cost--and make the deals before we know the costs involvedAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-50460569018541099422013-09-08T23:41:56.432+05:302013-09-08T23:41:56.432+05:30the end of this is rather haunting...the sugar swe...the end of this is rather haunting...the sugar sweet lies....to distract us...i would much rather mine deep for the gems than just skim the surface...the mansion i think if life as well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com