tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post8877743294874196641..comments2023-05-29T17:46:16.544+05:30Comments on Abin's literary world: Koan for the RainUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-16739346955866838762012-07-31T21:19:42.165+05:302012-07-31T21:19:42.165+05:30Round this way, all clouds have been spendthrifts ...Round this way, all clouds have been spendthrifts lately - if you see what I mean!Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-58188896114823342662012-07-31T12:31:51.360+05:302012-07-31T12:31:51.360+05:30A striking piece. You say much in few words.A striking piece. You say much in few words.Laura Mariahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17165700659874093849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-69902263902878133502012-07-31T06:18:04.374+05:302012-07-31T06:18:04.374+05:30The last line is powerful.It foretells of impendin...The last line is powerful.It foretells of impending problems if not addressed in time. Great thoughts Abin!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-25235271142941180762012-07-31T06:14:30.761+05:302012-07-31T06:14:30.761+05:30One of those writes that makes me project when and...One of those writes that makes me project when and where those clouds will end up giving life or what will be destroyed in the fury of a long overdue storm. Sweet short punch to the solar plexus and a platform for thunderous thoughts and the anxiety of waiting for just one drop.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-26122870432874797942012-07-31T03:41:14.846+05:302012-07-31T03:41:14.846+05:30"Clouds unspent will gather greater storms.&q..."Clouds unspent will gather greater storms." ... There is a lot of wisdom in this. We try to hold it all sometimes, and then we explode in a rage. This is very good.flipside recordshttp://flipsiderecords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-29983207755494655282012-07-31T01:44:45.246+05:302012-07-31T01:44:45.246+05:30love it. i forget already what a koan is. *runs to...love it. i forget already what a koan is. *runs to look it up*Marianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07027954226798117530noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-8030905775437298542012-07-31T00:49:18.542+05:302012-07-31T00:49:18.542+05:30This is excellent--the image of outer and interior...This is excellent--the image of outer and interior clouds and storms couldn't be more deftly aligned, no frills, all meaning.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-68120813505863896722012-07-30T22:18:43.967+05:302012-07-30T22:18:43.967+05:30Sad about the woman drying her cheeks. Leaves me w...Sad about the woman drying her cheeks. Leaves me wondering why she was crying. Very lovely imagery.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-16194759156148017142012-07-30T21:26:46.230+05:302012-07-30T21:26:46.230+05:30Wow, succinct and powerful. Loved both images, clo...Wow, succinct and powerful. Loved both images, clouds and woman. Fantastic closing line.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-3527404007010126982012-07-30T20:50:46.204+05:302012-07-30T20:50:46.204+05:30Woww this is so good....the last line is the most....Woww this is so good....the last line is the most....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-78348950281343655822012-07-30T02:20:34.846+05:302012-07-30T02:20:34.846+05:30I am keeping my eye on those "clouds unspent....I am keeping my eye on those "clouds unspent."<br /><br />There's something both ominous and tender about this poem. I like both elements.Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-40743718022782176142012-07-30T02:18:11.194+05:302012-07-30T02:18:11.194+05:30nice - clouds (like life) always do, don't the...nice - clouds (like life) always do, don't they, gather for greater storms if left unspentAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-46914043526637055902012-07-30T00:26:58.407+05:302012-07-30T00:26:58.407+05:30No word out of place here, and what an image of th...No word out of place here, and what an image of the kohl-stained clouds weeping tears - I must admit I wish I had thought of it first!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-66677440769171568832012-07-29T23:55:06.364+05:302012-07-29T23:55:06.364+05:30And thanks for the lovely response to my post ~And thanks for the lovely response to my post ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-32850346648117187502012-07-29T23:36:34.755+05:302012-07-29T23:36:34.755+05:30You pulled us in, gently led us out, following the...You pulled us in, gently led us out, following theme and form. So brief. So powerful.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-80471877060807110582012-07-19T16:08:24.903+05:302012-07-19T16:08:24.903+05:30I like the poetry form ~
That last line was powe...I like the poetry form ~ <br /><br />That last line was powerful, a gathering of greater storms.<br /><br />Happy day to you Abin ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4982476197162274889.post-43518218222351211232012-07-19T14:48:39.050+05:302012-07-19T14:48:39.050+05:30Still sureness of rage and motion and repetition.
...Still sureness of rage and motion and repetition.<br /><br />Economical but potent.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com