Friday, September 9, 2011

Monsoon will rush

Monsoon will rush
Through windows and curtains of rust.
Monsoon will rush
Through arid old bars of putrefying crust
And cleanse into song our ashes of past.
Monsoon will rush.

[In response to the Thursday Think Tank prompt at Poets United]

13 comments:

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

A very strong view through your window to the outside world and all its dangers.


Eileen

Heaven said...

Like the refraining lines and rhyming words...a positive look in life ~

Old Ollie said...

tight and musical...great piece Abin.

Mystic_Mom said...

Vivid images and a great feel. Nicely done.

Kim Nelson said...

Monsoon... I live in the Sonora Desert. I understand the power. This piece does it justice.

Laurie Kolp said...

The repition intensifies the urgency here.

Abin Chakraborty said...

Thank you so much for so many reads and so many encouraging comments.
The monsoon has rushed!

Kerry O'Connor said...

This form is really working for you. Great response to the prompt.

Robert said...

Hey hey hey,hello Mr.Poet! You have been doing very great pal. Im so glad. So very glad. Congrats. I'm very happy for you.
May monsoon rush and drench your soil into fresh bloom.

Abin Chakraborty said...

Hello Robert! Looooooooong time no read! See if you like the new ones and please also check the publication link.thanks mate.u know as well as i do that for quit some months, u were the only regular reader i had.thanks a ton for that.and please dont stop.keep reading, keep posting.

Robert said...

:) thats so very nice of you,I must say. Thanks a lot. You made me feel very special. :) loved that. Yes I have been out of town for a month and am back now.Will remain in the loop friend.For the special place you have just given me.M very happy.Thanks a lot again

Ella said...

I love the rushed, vivid feel of your words~

The Brave said...

Very strong - curtains of rust. wow.