where dreams may cross,without wavering between profit and loss
A very strong view through your window to the outside world and all its dangers.Eileen
Like the refraining lines and rhyming words...a positive look in life ~
tight and musical...great piece Abin.
Vivid images and a great feel. Nicely done.
Monsoon... I live in the Sonora Desert. I understand the power. This piece does it justice.
The repition intensifies the urgency here.
Thank you so much for so many reads and so many encouraging comments. The monsoon has rushed!
This form is really working for you. Great response to the prompt.
Hey hey hey,hello Mr.Poet! You have been doing very great pal. Im so glad. So very glad. Congrats. I'm very happy for you.May monsoon rush and drench your soil into fresh bloom.
Hello Robert! Looooooooong time no read! See if you like the new ones and please also check the publication link.thanks mate.u know as well as i do that for quit some months, u were the only regular reader i had.thanks a ton for that.and please dont stop.keep reading, keep posting.
:) thats so very nice of you,I must say. Thanks a lot. You made me feel very special. :) loved that. Yes I have been out of town for a month and am back now.Will remain in the loop friend.For the special place you have just given me.M very happy.Thanks a lot again
I love the rushed, vivid feel of your words~
Very strong - curtains of rust. wow.
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