Wednesday, March 14, 2012

Roving Eyes

There's something to be said
For clear waxed legs
That sweep off your mind
To Rebecca or Venus of marbles in shape
That glitter with the whiteness of  milk.

Lapped with the full-flavoured
Sweetness in thought
Buds now are islands of dream.

Thrust within vortex of splinters and mud
These now are aides to a supplicating mind
That rush me to my hermitage of night.

20 comments:

Sherry Blue Sky said...

"That rush me to my hermitage of night." Wow, Abin, great poem!

nene said...

wonderfully seductive to the male mind of how desireable are womens shapley legs.

Nicholas V. said...

Wonderful paean to female loveliness!

booguloo said...

"She's got Legg's and she knows how to use them..."

Heaven said...

I was not expecting this..ha..ha...

I am always interested in the man's point of view. Nice share Abin ~

Mary said...

Love the sensuality here, Abin!

Kerry O'Connor said...

Reminds me of the Restoration poets who would write odes to the lady's eyebrows or a single lock of hair.

Daydreamertoo said...

Legs do look and feel lovely when they are smooth.
Lovely capture in it imagery.

Enigmatic Soul said...

Interesting. :)

Sherry Blue Sky said...

So lovely. Good one, Abin!

Mary Mansfield said...

Very sensuous!

Jack said...

"Buds now are islands of dream."

Wow. So great.

Hannah said...

Buds now are islands of dream.

Silky feel to this poem... :)

Ed Pilolla said...

i am also a leg man:)

Semaphore said...

...And thus falls Pygmalion.

Ella said...

Abin
This was so well done~
I loved the magic you created and the seductive charms you showed us!

Fireblossom said...

Smooth legs are happy legs!

Susie Clevenger said...

Seductive reflection of the male point of view. A great piece!

Margaret said...

That sweep off your mind
To Rebecca or Venus of marbles in shape
That glitter with the whiteness of milk.

...I'm off to shave my legs! :)

Mystic_Mom said...

This is very well crafted and I enjoyed it. :-)