Friday, June 8, 2012

Arundel Tomb in Waterloo by Thames


They entered and stood, stony and staid;
Nothing that’ll stir your heart as you moved
Punctual and fast in well-mannered calm,
Straight along tracks of Bakerloo line.

All with the newspapers flung open wide
Or tapped into headphones of exile of sorts:
Clusters of islands on move.

But there they had sat, her fingers in his
Even as he covered his eyes and sighed
As she looked on and pressed his hand tight;
Veins full of reciprocal tears.

Perhaps she had whispered, ‘Are you alright?
Perhaps a more consoling commonplace it was.
A long look followed their words and nods
And sighs that entwined their fingers more close,
Knotted into unflappable strength.

Stations and colours and people had passed,
There they had stayed unmoved.

Locked in my heart, I left them as such:
Arundel tomb in Waterloo by Thames.

[The poem is inspired by a real life event framed by a poem and an image: the following are the links to the poem by Larkin and the  image of the actual Arundel Tomb

18 comments:

Jack said...

You combine imagery and emotion so well.

Matthew John Davies said...

Third stanza, while not showy has tight force: "Veins full of reciprocal tears".

Mary said...

This is a very moving poem, Abin. You have created a vivid picture of this couple at the tomb..

Kerry O'Connor said...

How very interesting. I like the way you added a very real modern and human element into the scene.

Sherry Blue Sky said...

You have captured this event so well with your words that I can see them there, a still couple in the midst of the moving crowd. Lovely, Abin, and nice to meet you as I am foraging around in the Pantry!!!!

Heaven said...

What an interesting tomb and image for your inspirational post ~

I like the creative take specially entwined fingers, beings full of reciprocal tears ~

Daydreamertoo said...

Awww...that is so touching. To think they hold hands into forever. Your prose was vivid even without the link to the picture but, the picture adds so much more to the imagery of your prose.
A really lovely write.

Aidz Giannini said...

No need to say much but very kewl scribe

Susan said...

Beautiful; I agree with the comments above. I have occasionally fantasized--and even wished--that things remain behind as I left them. It's an odd little game, as if, for example, I could turn the radio on hours later and it would still be playing the song from when I turned it off. Sometimes a computer will oblige.

kaykuala said...

You made the 'stony and staid' very much alive. I looked at the picture and realized your imagery captured it very well, Abin!

Hank

Marian said...

interesting, and i really like "headphones of exile of sorts."

Adura Ojo said...

Like poems, pictures can often say as much as we want them to say. Vivid picture 'written' of the scene. Well done.

Laura said...

"And sighs that entwined their fingers more close,
Knotted into unflappable strength." beautiful poem through and through.

Kim Nelson said...

A cinematic pan across the crowd, then close in on the couple. We get a glimpse, a tidbit of conversation. And we want more.

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2012/06/18/tucson-summer/

Mystic_Mom said...

^ What they all said above, and adding my own, "Wow you have done something really amazing here!"

Jinksy said...

Third stanza is my favourite too - full of emotion...

kolembo said...

Beautiful images and really meditative space. The comment above is right. Nice, deep, musing.

Old Ollie said...

very cool - an inspiring place