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Beautiful, Abin! The beauty of birds flying (even over so much pollution) is a sight to behold. Thankfully we humans can always look UP!
Thanks a lot Mary :)
"flew through pallor of gray" love this!
this is really beautiful. i was struck yesterday by a flock of sparrows. extra points for "shimmied."
i am happy to find that finally the sparrows, swans and doves are finally out of the gutters...:-)short but strong
finding beauty in the midst of ugliness. you have a way of expressing your mind. loved this piece. ~Olive Tree. http://peaceroad.wordpress.com/2011/11/25/hate-me-then/
'shimmied' is such a fresh, original way to describe bird flight. What a great opening line.
I'm with Other Mary - dancing doves who shimmy, are special - but were you perhaps thinking of 'shimmer', too?
Yes Jinsky.Shimmer too.but opted for shimmy as it seemed more appealing here :)
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